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Monday, 6 May 2013

Island of paradise


WALT: write a creative story in paragraphs
                       Island of paradise
If I had a Island I would like it to be in the atlantic oceans where its hot. I want to have lots of people on my Island.

In my island I would have lots of shopping malls like sylvia park so I could buy new clothes every day. My shopping malls would have the latest clothes and everything would be free. There would be only robots working in the mall.  One quarter of the shopping mall would be supermarkets filled with junk food.

My house would be a mansion made of  diamonds and gold. The size of my mansion would be bigger than Queen Elizabeths so all my family and friends and also my favorite celebrities can live with me. Inside my mansion I would have a olympic size swimming pool with warm water and a theater. Every room would have the best quality furniture. In my room I would have a King x2 size bed with the walls made of diamonds and also the original mona lisa painting on the wall.

I would have a private disneyland right across my mansion so everytime I get bored I could just walk across the street to disneyland. Beside disney world I would like Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory but instead called Saleha’s chocolate factory so I could have all the chocolate in the world.

I wish this would become reality in 15-20 years when I get a good job.






2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hi Saleha, your island is very interesting. I love chocolate as well. My favourite part of your island, is the super markets and shopping malls. If your dream becomes a reality in 10-15 years, how would you feel.

Anonymous said...

Hey, Saleha. I liked the part when you said Willy Wonka's Chocolate factory. I really love Chocolate. Would you really want lots of people on your Island?

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