Netball game

WALT: write a narrative

Netball game                                               

“GIRLS!!” Mrs Ramkolowan screeched.

“ I say, burn its hot in here.. It must be G.I coming first this year” chanted the girls sitting on the blue wooden benches. Everybody was so nervous as they watched the G.I girls play their final game of netball with Bethlehem college.

In the first set G.I was losing by 6 points and they were  disappointed. They all dragged their feet to the sideline as if they were carrying a ton of stone in every.. Mrs Ramkolowan tried to cheer them up by using  motivating words. Finally, it was the last set. Alisi the goal shooter was petrified.

The girls were exuberant to turn the game around.

“Five minutes left” yelled the time keeper. The score was 16- 9 to G.I.  G.I was overwhelmed by the results but Mrs Ramkalowan was still  belched commands from the sideline.. Every time they scored their step got lighter and lighter. Soon they all looked like they were flying in the air.

Hooooot! The hooter went and G.I had won the netball competition for 2013 18-12.I. Everyone was gleaming with delight and filled with pride. They shook hands with the Bethlehem girls and then ran to tell others about their success. Mrs Ramkolowan ran as if she was a true athlete to the field to Mr Ramkolowan to tell the news.  Mr Ramkolowan was jovial when he was heard the news and celebrated with the girls.